Comments on: Hai(perlinked)ku

By: Crafty Green Poet

Crafty Green Poet — Thu, 21 May 2009 06:51:07 +0000

excellent, that’s very creative hyperlinking ….

By: James

James — Tue, 19 May 2009 23:35:09 +0000

I was pleasantly surprised by how much I enjoyed doing this exercise, but I don’t think I could manage hyperlinking a longer poem like this. Still, it was interesting to pause and consider each word individually. Thank you, all, for reading and for your comments.

By: Nicole Nicholson

Nicole Nicholson — Mon, 18 May 2009 15:49:38 +0000

I like this. As for the hyperlinks, they work well. I especially like your hyperlink wordplay between “gauzy” and the mathematician. A joy to read.

By: lawrence gladeview

lawrence gladeview — Sun, 17 May 2009 15:37:41 +0000

this made me chuckle this morning, the hyperlinks that is. the poem rocked my socks, great read on a rainy sunday morning. “gauzy” couldn’t have been a more perfect choice.

By: Vary the Line » Blog Archive » like ink bleeding through paper

Vary the Line » Blog Archive » like ink bleeding through paper — Sun, 17 May 2009 15:22:00 +0000

[...] Write Poem is doing hyperlinked poems (my favourite posted there so far is this haiku, from which the title of this entry comes), which reminded me of centos – I’ll have to write [...]

By: Laura Valentine

Laura Valentine — Fri, 15 May 2009 16:27:26 +0000

Wow…who knew 17 syllables could take you in so many directions. Excellent application of hyperlinks!

By: andy sewina.

andy sewina. — Fri, 15 May 2009 16:17:58 +0000

Yeah, your Hai-Ku is hip!

By: Tamra at Laughing Dove

Tamra at Laughing Dove — Fri, 15 May 2009 05:03:13 +0000

I like the haiku and all the places it leads to. And congrats on your NBN award.

By: wayne

wayne — Fri, 15 May 2009 02:34:39 +0000

nicely done