Comments on: Waking for the Descent

By: James

James — Thu, 25 Jun 2009 12:07:27 +0000

Thanks, everyone, for stopping by and reading this and also for your kind comments.

Joanne Merriam — Mon, 22 Jun 2009 21:35:29 +0000

We carved the world like onion slices
to be devoured one-by-one,
ignoring the other passengers�
wrinkled noses.

I love this.

gautami tripathy — Sun, 21 Jun 2009 14:59:26 +0000

Fantastic start and marvellous ending! x-y-z: all three axes

Erin Davis — Fri, 19 Jun 2009 20:16:47 +0000

I love this. What dreamy fun!

angie — Fri, 19 Jun 2009 19:32:59 +0000

I love the dreaminess of this, but I must say my favorite part of all is:

“New Drape City: Moribund Hand, 2003.”

(fasten your seatbelt, indeed!)

James — Fri, 19 Jun 2009 12:02:43 +0000

Thank you, all, for reading and for your kind words.

Ingrid (durable pigments) — Fri, 19 Jun 2009 09:12:48 +0000

Oh, the closing bibliography is such a clever way to use the words! Very nice.

Jeeves — Fri, 19 Jun 2009 05:04:36 +0000

Nice one…..

Tamra at Laughing Dove — Thu, 18 Jun 2009 23:53:45 +0000

So well done, as everyone has said. And I love, love, love the bibliography.

wayne — Thu, 18 Jun 2009 16:15:34 +0000

“world like onion slices”…and lots more here to enjoy