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Patton’s Army

by James Brush on March 3rd, 2010 | 4 Comments

A scene in Patton:
fallen infantrymen
buzzards pick over bodies

A soldier with a machine gun
blasts the birds. I cheer;
my mom immediately scolds me.

Those birds aren’t doing anything wrong.

Since then, I’ve learned
vultures, too, are beautiful:
they clean our messes

faster than military undertakers
or even the highway department.

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4 Responses to “Patton’s Army”

  1. Dick says:

    A fine pairing with the earlier vulture poem.

  2. Paul Oakley says:

    Would that they could clean our messes not just our physical remains! But for what they do, we are the better, on average. I’m with Dick. This is a find companion piece to your earlier vulture poem.

    The scolding tells such realism.

    • James says:

      Good point. It’d be great if we could avoid some of those messes to begin with. And, yes, a good scolding can have quite an impact. Thanks for your comment.

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