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Among the Ruins of Stars

by James Brush on April 22nd, 2011 | 8 Comments

mercury drops
rolling through palms

faster than setting
summer stars

whose ancestors shed
the iron in our blood

follow the electrons
to noble gasses

follow the moon-eyed
smiler to his treasure

peel back the asphalt
by the factory

find mercury balls
rolling marbles

in our soft
and willing hands

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8 Responses to “Among the Ruins of Stars”

  1. Nice one, James. I like the way it moves in and out and then back in again to the balls of mercury in the hand. Very appropriate poem for a blog called Coyote Mercury.

  2. I like the tone of this and the way it turns back on itself

  3. margo roby says:

    I am particularly liking the last three poems, the one from your files has a different flavour and voice, but I enjoyed it. This one and the last one [in particular]seem connected although I haven’t figured out why my brain thinks so with this one. I like the movement of it. Hope all is well, James.

    • James says:

      Thanks, Margo, they feel connected to me too. Glad you liked the older one too. It’s fun to dig through the files and find something I kind of like.

  4. Deb says:

    Love this. The science in it transformed to magic by your words, the hands, the play. Super.

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