Inside a shell, there was a sea
holding all the world’s blue waters.
But it was also half full of drought.
All she’d ever known was drought,
but ear to the shell, she heard the sea,
the circling cadence of the waters.
Caroline released the waters
and left a shell now full of drought
and threw it deep into the sea.
Sea waters stall the birth of drought.
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PAD 2014: #22: Optimism/Pessimism | NaPoWriMo #19: Seashells
After yesterday’s attempt at a sestina, I decided to try the related tritina, which seems to offer a bit less rope with which to hang oneself.
James Brush is a teacher and writer who lives in Austin, TX. He tries to get outside as much as possible.
I love this one.:)
Thank you, Darlene!
Half full of drought, wonderful phrase. Well done!
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