Dreams, like dew in the early morning,
drip from a shipwreck survivor’s rag.
Each glistening drop a chance, hope
against another day of slow gnawing
thirst.
Dreams are dew in these latitudes—precious, scarce.
To cling to one is to forsake the other.
Staring at the dew collected on his faded rag,
he squeezes it above his mouth.
Each drop a moment’s
relief.
In the blistering afternoon,
dreams of early morning dew
fly off like the shorebirds
he imagined yesterday.
He marvels at each drop,
each perfect liquid globe,
like the one surrounding him,
that only delays
thirst.
In these shimmering drops,
he sees sharks and a noose
tied by his own hand.
Each dream falls due
against the night,
the moon’s reflection,
endless rolling waves
fade
like dreams,
like dew
in the early
morning.
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This is for Read Write Poem: It’s all about the First Line. The idea was that participants would contribute a line of poetry and then choose someone else’s as the starting point for a poem based on freewriting from the borrowed line.
This was heavily influenced by Jules Verne’s The Survivors of the Chancellor, which I read last week as part of my Lost reading project.
The first line, “Dreams like dew in the early morning” was provided by Sam at thinking cities… Make sure to pay him a visit and read some of his poetry. It’s good stuff.






